tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3914135550772105266.post5893944399040512643..comments2023-01-09T06:24:14.594-05:00Comments on The Indelible Clearing: Rites Of MayRamón Bautistahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18030537574532690928noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3914135550772105266.post-83514388448829000912020-07-03T19:58:21.562-04:002020-07-03T19:58:21.562-04:00Thank you Cynch, my intelligent Ateneo clasmate, f...Thank you Cynch, my intelligent Ateneo clasmate, for this generous reading! I'll reply after this crazy 4th of July. Enjoy the holiday!<br />Ramón Bautistahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18030537574532690928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3914135550772105266.post-13565273069173779412020-07-03T18:53:14.221-04:002020-07-03T18:53:14.221-04:00Mon, I loved reading this very Filipino tale, so r...Mon, I loved reading this very Filipino tale, so rich in imagery and Filipino flavour! You captured sights and sounds of "home" that we each, in our unique ways, carry in our hearts as we live out our stories in various corners of the world. I was very touched by the couple's love for their child, and by their devotion to each other. I felt sadness and frustration over the judgmental and superstitious reactions Ludringo and Inya received from the townsfolk. I read one part over and over--where Ludringo tried to crack a joke because he noticed Inya's disappointment. The moment held a swift exchange of quiet emotions and reactions between the couple, all described with a minimum of carefully chosen words. I had to pause and reread the section to let all the complex dynamics sink in! A moment sometimes carries such weighty feelings. I also loved how, later in the story, the couple expressed their quiet optimism, not with words, but through their energetic work. The images are a special treat for Filipino readers like me who read the English metaphors and hear them in Tagalog! That is one joy of this Filipino folktale you've shared with us. The other is the assurance that we carry our love for home in our hearts and continue to draw on the strength of our roots while we work on our dreams and carve out the paths of our new lives all over the world. Thank you, Mon!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com